The October Blood – Part Two

Dylan Thomas names the October Blood in this poem written for his 30th birthday.

DSC01407It was my thirtieth
Year to heaven stood there then in the summer noon
Though the town below lay leaved with October blood.
O may my heart’s truth
Still be sung
On this high hill in a year’s turning.

I wrote my offering two years ago when asked by a local theatre to write a poem about new beginnings. It works with a sense of the aching beauty of autumn and the pain I feel at the politics of austerity which, sadly, two years on is even more part of the dominant political lexicon.

An inner journey is called for, to find our ignored wounds, individually our hidden griefs, collectively the bankruptcy our the current system, and to seek the remaking we dream of.

It is the heart’s truth that Dylan calls for, the truth mirrored in the October blood and the remembered souls of November. Those like Dylan, whose named wounds speak with an integrity that those sitting in the safe seats dare not utter because it opens up a starving edge where no one group has a monopoly on the truth. Where we have to pool our collective genius and find a new way. Where power has to be relinquished and replaced with a desire to find the way forward together.

The Starving Edge

You ask me to write of new beginnings

when from

un-leaving trees

autumn blood flows,

when the talk is all of cuts carving

the trunk of consented life.

Such wanton speeches made sly solemnly

by those

sitting smug in

the safest seats,

feed the juggernaut of greed, taxing

fierce sacrifices from the frail.

Can vulnerable buds be induced at

this blood

wounded juncture?

As heedless boots

cause a crunching carpet’s golden leaves

to break down to crumbling brown.


The bleeding of trees and the grieving of

clouds names

November’s rise,

month of recalled

souls, as a gusted gull croaks above

the nets my words are casting.

Time to grieve the wounds that fester unsung,

to find

the silent rooms,

the dormant tombs

that long lain unused could prove wombs to

the remaking we ache for.

The true new beginning is to live stripped,


and wilful at

the starving edge

of brightening days, where solstice endured

yields to winter birthing spring.

Written by Adrian G R Scott

Adrian G R Scott lives in the Rivelin Valley, Sheffield, he is a poet , writer and amateur photographer. For more He has studied theology, organisation development and is now working on a PhD in English and Creative Writing at Sheffield University. He has written two books of poetry, one of prose and edited a collection of Poetry by the two writing groups he facilitates. After suffering a breakdown in 2014 he has undergone Jungian Analysis for the last two years. He also facilitates Rites of Passage for men and is fascinated by the stories and poetry that come from holy scriptures, fairy tales and other major world religions. He is especially interested in how we find our way through the world with the help of such stories and poems. ​ His books are available at Buy Books

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